Readers Wanted

We have written a short book intended for young readers, and we would like your feedback. We’re interested in your ideas on plot, character development and dialogue, etc. If you have a little time to spare, we would really appreciate your critical insights. Jack Preston King, Lizella Prescott, Kay Bolden, Dan Moore, DiAmaya Dawn, Adam, Diabetic Cyborg, Joan Evans, Wild Flower, Charlotte Franklin, Mary Holden, hannah miller, Indira Reddy, Stephen M. Tomic, Olivia Colman, Randomly Me, Amy Colman, Normal Earthling, Jack Herlocker, A Maguire, Angie Romano and anyone else who so desires.

Thom Garrett and Danna Colman

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Epilogue